I don't even know if I'm allowed to do this but its free speech so it doesn't matter now. What I want to talk about to day is polices. I think they are good and all but sometimes they are some of the worst people ever. So it has been nearly a month since the incidence with the robbery of my stuff and other members of the track team. So once we we found out that the stuff were stolen. I called 911 and I told them the story. The police officer also told me to go to the campus cop next thing tomorrow and tell him the story along with my other friends too.
That was what my friends and I did. We told them the story and we also have SUSPECTS to whom stole it because one of my friends saw them on the bus with the stolen items. We later on found out there names and reported it. This got my hopes high very much because we got names and stuff so the chances of getting it back were higher. The thing they stole was an iTouch. It cost around 300 something or so and it was an early Christmas present. One month later, referring to now, I still haven't gotten notice from the cops. I'm pretty sure they either don't care or they just don't want to help. I mean what other reasons and evidence should I have shown them that the suspect stolen my stuff?
My dad also told me i couldn't buy another one and he is also not buying me anything for a year. So right now, my parents are still frustrated and I'm left with no presents this Christmas. So thanks a lot officers.
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Polices isn't a word. Police is used for both singular and plural forms.
ReplyDeleteToday is also only one word.
Instead of incidence it should be incident because you're talking about a specific event.
Combine some of your sentences it'll make your writing sound less choppy.
Instead of saying "my hopes high very much" it's better reworded as "my hopes very high".
Redundancy on the "One month later, referring to now" since in your first paragraph you already mentioned "o it has been nearly a month since the incidence with the robbery ".
You said you wanted to work on your grammar didn't you? lol. Sorry I was bored waiting for IRIS to load.
good job by alvin.
ReplyDeleteDang, Alvin! Remind me to give you a cut of my paycheck this month.
ReplyDeleteSorry about your frustrating situation, Steven. I've gotten stuff stolen numerous times and it is just infuriating! Such are the perils of attaching ourselves to material possessions...but that's another story.